Analysis of A time of care



A tickle in the wind and a flurry of adrenaline making my heart skip

Tripping me up and rattling my head so my thoughts are all a jumble
Icy cold shivers sending goosebumps through my soul
My knees weaken at the slightest hint of a glimmer of that smile
Each breath is harder than the next and it's difficult to speak

One shouldn't have such a power to shake a man to the core
Flesh of my hands sweaty and shaky and nervous giggles exit my mouth

Caught in a web created by a meticulous hand with dexterity and finesse
Artistically she weaves a net and captures my very heart and it's gladly given
Reaching through time and space and drawing me towards her
Ever have the fates been plotting yet she weaves her own fate and links our souls

Ages passby and pages turn yet forever something draws us together
Nobody knows why or how it happens
Drinking in eachother's every detail and memorizing each feature

Linking our hands giving us a powerful front which is hard to defeat
Our resolution to build each other up and turn away the doubters
Viciously defending one another if someone dares to cause harm
Embracing each other in good times and bad


Scheme X XXXX XX XXAX AXA XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01000100101010010111 10110101111111010 10110101111 1110101011010111 111101010110011 110110101101101 111110010010101011 1001010100100110100001 010011010101101011010 1011010101010 1010111011101101101 101010110101011010 11111110 1001100010100110 1010110101001111101 100101111010101010 1000101010111111 01011001101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,149
Words 215
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Written on January 23, 2024

Submitted by daddymagic on January 24, 2024

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Dale "Coyote" Johnson

I am 48 years old and was born and raised in Minnesota, mostly in foster care and other facilities and passed off because back in the 80's mental illness was boys just being boys and you had to have extremes in order to be correctly diagnosed. more…

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