Analysis of Lost Deep Within Desire of You



Enchanted embers turn to flame
Upon mere mention of your name.
Carnal spirit entwines as bodies touch,
Enraptured deep within your clutch.
A sensual captive of your charms,
My body wants to feel your arms.
Your breath it stings in caressed ecstasy,
Oh, to be captive as you lie next to me.
Cannot make sense of these feelings,
Without you near my heart is reeling.
So dizzy lost within your kiss,
Pressed deep inside you I feel your bliss.
My lips caress tenderly against your neck,
Forever a captive of your scent.
Entranced and pulled within your clover,
Soon, my life it will be over.
Why can’t life just be this simple,
To be next to you it feels so sinful.
As I slowly walk away,
My soul, it might live another day.


Scheme AABBCCDDEFGGHIJJKKLL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 01010111 01110111 101011101 01010111 010010111 11011111 1111001100 11110111111 10111110 011111110 11010111 110111111 11011000111 010010111 010101110 11111110 11111110 1111111110 1110101 111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 723
Words 152
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 565
Words per stanza (avg) 133
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Written on January 23, 2024

Submitted by ChrisMorganroth on January 23, 2024

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Chris E Morganroth IV

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