Analysis of Kill me



This worthless soul

Watch him spin his wheels

The mind races

His mind races

Wanders past acres and acres of dry land

He's alone, lonely, dying

He's like an icicle of death falling to the ground

Kicked by a child

Cracked on the pavement

Daddy where are you? Mommy where did you go?

I can't survive this life on my own

I'm going to die, my friends

Please have mercy on me God. Because this is making less and less sense by the minute.

No one is here. No one is coming to my aid. No one cares enough.

God help me please. I'm on my knees at your Cross. Please tell me you're real. Please show me you're alive.


Scheme X X A A X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1101 11111 0110 1110 10110010111 1011010 1111001110101 1101 11010 10111101111 110111111 1101111 111011101111010111010 11111111011111101 1111111111111111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 660
Words 148
Sentences 12
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by kbdallas2020 on January 21, 2024

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Kelley Davies

Sometimes I wish I knew what was going on. But then I have to let go and let things be as they are. more…

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