Analysis of Relaxing

Ronald Bunch 1982 (Grand Rapids)



Oh, how I wished to relax,
I use the bathroom a lot, laxative.
In the nature, I walk,
But not talk.

Animals go on the ground,
But not in the pound.
They relax,
Especially if they eat flax.

Nature can be relaxing,
But not if you're faxing.
It's intense to be heard,
And if you learn the Word.

Oh, how is this?
Is it bliss?
Now it's not over,
But you may find a lover.

Go on a dating site,
But don't get into a fight.
Now just relax
when you fill-out the tax.


Scheme AXBB CCAA DDEE FFGG HHAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (50%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 1111101 110101100 001011 111 1001101 11001 101 0101111 1011010 111110 101111 011101 1111 111 11110 1111010 110101 1110101 1101 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 461
Words 116
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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Submitted by RonaldBunch on January 20, 2024

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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. He’s committed to his Catholic faith and his work. Ronald's interests span a wide range, including writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He’s on a journey to become a published author. He's writing a new book, he will seek an agent and traditional publication for it. He did volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, and Habitat for Humanity. He loves pizza and cats. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace in Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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