Analysis of In The Day's When We Are Dead



Listen! The end draws nearer,
Nearer the morning—or night—
And I see with a vision clearer
That the beginning was right!
These shall be words to remember
When all has been done and said,
And my fame is a dying ember
In the days when I am dead.
Listen! We wrote in sorrow,
And we wrote by candle light;
We took no heed of the morrow,
And I think that we were right—
(To-morrow, but not the day after,
And I think that we were right).

We wrote of a world that was human
And we wrote of blood that was red,
For a child, or a man, or a woman—
Remember when we are dead.

Listen! We wrote not for money,
And listen! We wrote not for fame—
We wrote for the milk and the honey
Of Kindness, and not for a name.

We paused not, nor faltered for any,
Though many fell back where we led;
We wrote of the few for the many—
Remember when we are dead.

We suffered as few men suffer,
Yet laughed as few men laugh;
We grin as the road grows rougher,
And a bitterer cup we quaff.

We lived for Right and for Laughter,
And we fought for a Nation ahead—
Remember it, friends, hereafter,
In the years when I am dead—
For to-morrow and not the day after,
For ourselves, and a Nation ahead.


Scheme ababacacdbdBaB eceC fgfg fcfC ahah acacac
Poetic Form
Metre 1001110 1001011 011101010 1001011 11111010 1111101 011101010 0011111 1011010 0111101 11111010 0111101 110110110 0111101 111011110 01111111 1011011010 0101111 10111110 01011111 111010010 11001101 111110110 11011111 111011010 0101111 11011110 111111 11101110 001111 11110110 011101001 01011010 0011111 1110010110 1001001001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,160
Words 236
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 14, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:10 min read
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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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