Analysis of desire love



Love used to be my guiding but now it's just broken promises and shattered dreams in the darkness its noting as it seems.
once love was sweet like a summer breeze now it's like a storm that brings me to my knees with heartache and tears.
love was supposed to heal my soul instead it left me feeling cold loneliness that consumes me by feeling low day by day.
the love in my heart is heavy with sorrow every day is hurt the tears fall like rain the emotions is hard to swallow in this darkness abyss I'm drowning in hollow.  


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Characters 525
Words 104
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 104
Words per line (avg) 25
Letters per stanza (avg) 415
Words per stanza (avg) 101

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I wrote this poem because love has a powerful emotion that can be expressed through heart and soul... poetry allows people to explore and express their feelings.

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Submitted by Rakailleshay2008 on December 06, 2023

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desire love

I grew up in a place where I spend most of my time sad, I like to write poetry to let out my past I enjoy writing poetry with family. more…

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