Analysis of Voidness of Rainfall



There's voidness in today's rainfall,
Who brought apathy in it.
Like clouds are weeping with me,
Every drop of tears and rainfall is uttering.
But no walls have been heard them, I tried, but I tried explaining.

Now in relief, as drops dried my eyes.
No shine and zeal in eyes, but saying a lot more than my lips.
What they are suffering with? It's heaviness of something that imprisoned my soul.

This rain no longer gives me pleasure.


Scheme XXXAA XXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 1110001 1111011 100111011100 111111111111010 100111111 110101110011111 111100111110101011 111101110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 436
Words 89
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on December 01, 2023

Submitted by Aayushi.111 on December 01, 2023

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