Analysis of First Thought



The thought of her arises warmth inside
Her smile is radiant emitting cheer
Does she know she is needed
I used to be scared of love but with her I'm no longer in fear,
I now understand her pain and past occurrences,
Never would I caused her ill-feelings
Faith in me I wish for her to see
I am here she is mine if she allows
I hope this is a forever thing
Waking to get beauty feeling her skin,
Not telling her my love is my only sin
It doesn't take eons to love it just has to be real and true
The love of my heart for her and no other
So there you know the extent of my love
So don't ever forget or fate is written for a destined purpose from above


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 649
Words 139
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 507
Words per stanza (avg) 136

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Written on January 07, 2024

Submitted by Travontex on January 07, 2024

Modified by Travontex on January 07, 2024

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Dominick Harvey

I started writing when I was a teenager when I was going through tough times as an adolescent rebellious and stubborn I eventually stopped but years later when I found myself staring at the ceiling of a cell I was inspired to pick up the pen again more…

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