Analysis of Sit down

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



If I can't sit down in the afternoon
To write a riddle or play a tune...

What's it all about?

If I must rush around like a blue arse fly to get me fortune before I die,

What a miserable soul am I.

If I can't sit here and commune with my heart
Where the hell would I start?

Don't get me wrong I followed those,
But now find them on the nose.

By the way
I love it here
Kicking back with a smoke and a beer.

Knowing that I have a guide
When others think
I am on the slide.


Scheme AA X B B CC DD XXX EXE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 111110001 110101101 11101 11110110111111100111 101000111 11111010111 101111 11111101 1111101 101 1111 101101001 1011101 1101 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 481
Words 119
Sentences 7
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Written on January 07, 2024

Submitted by myway6119 on January 07, 2024

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