Analysis of Magi



wear a coat, says she
cautioning, as mothers would
reassuring kiss

filled with joy I prance
hooves like drums devouring space
grasping air and time

near a tree we met
motherless and freed of love
cheering liberty

for a long journey
unprepared but confident
boyish fearlessness

hardship on the way
lashing winds across my face
devastating cold

famine on the way
wishing for a house of bread
or an inn, at least

murder on the way
sniping from a hidden dark
father, cover me

where will I find peace
longing for a mother's kiss
wear a coat, said she

where will I bring peace
what the gift I freely wear
wear a coat, said she

three mere boys were we
ready for another death?
ready for a birth?

when we came to land
cradle made amid debris
cooing mixed with fear

where your father, child
where the voice that gave you life
no reply was heard

where your mother, child
where the reassuring kiss
no reply was heard

what your name, I asked
not expecting an answer
wear a coat, said he

father, mother, child


Scheme axb xcx xxa axb dcx dxx dxa ebA exA axx xax fxG fbG xxa f
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 1001101 0101 11111 11101001 10101 10111 1000111 10100 10110 011100 101 10101 1010111 1001 10101 1010111 11111 10101 1010101 10101 11111 1010101 10111 11111 1011101 10111 11101 1010101 10101 11111 1010101 10111 11101 1011111 10111 11101 100101 10111 11111 1010110 10111 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,010
Words 201
Sentences 3
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

Inspired by Eliot's wonderful "Journey of the Magi".

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Written on December 25, 2023

Submitted by CorneighHoff on January 02, 2024

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