Analysis of Yearning for God



My soul is cast down within me,
I remember You from the land;
You open my eyes as to see,
By avoiding the sinking sand.

Deep calls unto deep at the roar,
That I can hear from the waterfall;
Breakers and waves open the door,
That is billowing out Your call.

By day You command steadfast love,
At night Your song is within me;
My prayer to You flows up above,
For my life the way it should be.

But why have You forgotten me,
And why do I go on mourning;
Oppression from foes can’t You see,
I am depressed without warning.

A deadly wound within my bones,
Adversaries taunt with their swords;
Can’t You hear my deafening groans,
As their words are causing discords.

I look for Your light to give hope,
For this turmoil of my soul;
As I continually cope,
My salvation Yours to control.

Copyright © 2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EAEA AFAF GXGG HIHI X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111011 10101101 11011111 10100101 11101101 11111010 10011001 11100111 1110111 11111011 11111101 11101111 11110101 01111110 01011111 11010110 01010111 1001111 11111001 1111101 11111111 111111 11010001 10101101 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 831
Words 185
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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The Light of Hope Psalm 42:6-11

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Written on January 02, 2024

Submitted by richardnsherrer on January 01, 2024

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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