Analysis of Hold my hand.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



Please hold my hand.

I know you can't hold my hand or grab and hold anything, and it always ends up on the floor. Please, Lord, I don't want to see anymore. You can't walk, talk, or close the door. All I end up doing is crying on the floor. Can you make her whole once more so I won't be so sore anymore? Then I can take your hand and go for a walk in the sand. Then maybe I would understand? I want her to feel the sand trickle through her hand. But the hourglasses is glued to the table, so I know she's not able. but he sent me to keep her stable.
I dedicate this to Diane my best friend this this poems about her.


Scheme X XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11111111101100111110111111110111111101111110110101111011111111101111111011010011101101110110110101101001110101111110111111010 11011011111110010
Characters 619
Words 132
Sentences 13
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 2
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 155
Words per line (avg) 43
Letters per stanza (avg) 233
Words per stanza (avg) 65

About this poem

His poems about an old girlfriend she had a disease they said it was sarabellasyndrome originated from Canada it's rare .She could not walk in an early age and she had trouble talking everything she grabbed fell all over the floor when I looked it was kind of sad. But she still my best friend and I see her a lot.

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Written on December 20, 2022

Submitted by alanswansea18 on December 29, 2023

Modified by alanswansea18 on December 30, 2023

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