Analysis of YOU AND ME



When I look at you
You intoxicate my senses
When I'm talking to you
I become tongue-tied as everything inside tenses
When I'm day-dreaming of you
I see you being with me
When I'm living each day without you
Only wish that it can be you with me.


Scheme ABABACAC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1010110 111011 10111110011 1111011 1111011 111011011 1011111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 244
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

This was written 01/08/1998. This was published in the anthology The Glistening Stars and Copyright 1998 by The International Library of Poetry. Copyright 2023 by sweetslimited.

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Written on January 08, 1998

Submitted by markanthonyschroettner on December 24, 2023

Modified by markanthonyschroettner on December 24, 2023

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