Analysis of Set Free So I Can Finally Just Be Me



Is there anyone out there
I have been calling for someone real
There are these sensations if there was
Plus the voices and noises in my head

If  there is anyone out there
Please I am begging you I need help
Ie been waiting to be set free
So I can I can finally just be me

It feels like I am in a nightmare
I don´t know what is real anymore
But it feels like I can wake from this one
I keep on having so many thought
that makes me feel like I am all alone

I call for help but there is no answer I Keep hitting the gates the gates of freedom  but they won´t break
Constantly begging and begging for a rescuer
But life won´t send one as if I don´t deserve it
Everything in my eyes now seems so fake

Just keep getting stabbed in the back over and over
Setting and burning me into a thousand flames
Is this a sign that I do not deserve to have this life
Or is this a sign that I am the big issue

How come all of this keeps happening
Why oh why is there no one coming to rescue
All I am asking and begging for is to be set free
That way I can finally at last be


Scheme AXXX AXBB AXXXX CDXC DXXE XEBB
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 11110111 111010111 1010010011 1111011 111101111 11101111 11111100111 11111001 111111101 1111111111 111101101 1111111101 11111111101110010111011111 100100101010 11111111111011 100111111 1110100110010 100101010101 11011111011111 111011110110 111111100 111111110110 11110010111111 1111100111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,072
Words 238
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 38

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I won this when I was in the deep end and started to acknowledge it can help others

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Written on December 16, 2023

Submitted by nerf.kin88 on December 19, 2023

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