Analysis of Haiku (16-20)



16
don't rush, don't rush my
sweltering-summer snowshoe wings,
cicada molting

17
with legion new-sprung
onomatopoeias stuns
the demon, Zgomot

18
a uniformed man
beside the monarched milkweeds
sleeps in starched cotton

19
dirt-borne seedlings yearn
sunward, some day to become
her pink-gold roses

20
goose-down pillow notes
the dream, then is discarded
quill by poking quill


Scheme AXBX AXXC AXBX AXXX AXCX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1 11111 1001011 01010 1 11011 11 0101 1 0101 01011 10110 1 11101 1011101 01110 1 11101 0111010 11101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 426
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by James_Kirkpatrick on December 16, 2023

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