Analysis of A note from our heart



Upon these dales
We were one feather,
On a long flight being together,
In search of grains of life.

Upon these branches
We were one long chirp,
One melodious song is a harp,
In search of fountains of life.

The streams yonder,
The fields are ripe and evergreen,
Those teeming winds,
And those harvesting seasons -

These were our endless meads,
Our throbbing heart,
Our happy days,
And treasured moments for the future.

Now, after a long season,
You are leaving these beautiful dales.
In search of further sights
You are preparing for a long flight.

It will be a long miss,
The dales have fallen into silence.
Beyond yonder hills
It is all a vanishing trail.

Here, within a veil of mist,
Melodious days return to our thoughts.
Here, within our diminishing circle
Your association returns as an endless whisper.

Graceful was thy benevolence
Fruitful was thy whole endeavor.
Peaceful was thy very presence
Cheerful was our clan without a peer.

And our clients are blest,
Your services are the best.
Our words are really honest,
Amongst us, you are a beacon of light.

As you leave these dales
Our hearts are deep and silent.
We, standing in a single file
Pray you a sojourn full of bliss.  
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Scheme ABBC XXXC BXXX XXXB XAXD EFXX XXXB FBFX GGXD AXXEA
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 10110 101110010 011111 01110 10111 101001101 0111011 0110 0111010 1101 0110010 1010101 10101 10101 010101010 1100110 111011001 011101 110101011 111011 011100110 01101 11101001 1010111 01001011101 10110010010 1001001111010 10110100 10111010 10111010 1011010101 0101011 1100101 10111010 0111101011 11111 10111010 11000101 11010111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,240
Words 249
Sentences 16
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem was recited on the eve of the retirement of our colleague Mrs. Bilasini Vijayan on 31st Aug 2009 from the State Bank of India. The poem is self-explanatory

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Written on August 31, 2009

Submitted by ravi_panamanna on December 14, 2023

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Ravi Panamanna

My actual name is Subramanian A. I am a retired official of the State Bank of India. Settled in Palakkad, Kerala, India. My literary awards include The Barath Award for Literature (best story), and the Poiesis Awards both in Poetry and short story, all conducted jointly by Xpress publications.com. My interests cover photography, philosophy, and science. Google search under Ravi Panamanna would take the searcher to my various links. more…

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