Analysis of stay small my loves



In a world so big, where dangers may roam,
A dad stands, wishing his kids could stay at home.
He sees them growing, ready to explore,
But in his heart, he just wants something more.

"Stay little," he whispers in the quiet night,
Wrapped up safe in love's warm light.
Outside, the world can be tough and mean,
He wants to shield them, keep the bad unseen.

He knows there's trouble, troubles they might find,
In the stories of life, in the daily grind.
A dad's heart, a place of love and care,
A wish for safety in the open air.

"Stay small, my loves," he softly prays,
Hoping to protect them in so many ways.
But he knows they'll face challenges and strife,
Building their courage and creating their life.

Innocence slipping, like sand through a sieve,
Yet, he hopes they'll carry the love he'll give.
A dad's love, a shield, a caring hug,
Guiding them through this world so big.

He wishes for their joy, for their spirit to twirl,
Aware that life's a journey in this vast, big world.
In his heart, a plea as they begin to unfurl,
For safety, for love, for his boys and girls.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIXX JXJX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 0011111011 01110111111 1111010101 1011111101 11011000101 1110111 110111101 1111110101 1111010111 00101100101 011011101 0111000101 11111101 10101101101 1111110001 10110001011 1001011101 1111100111 011010101 10111111 110111111011 011101001111 011011101101 1101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,080
Words 231
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 34

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stay safe children

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Written on December 09, 2023

Submitted by conductor on December 09, 2023

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