Analysis of Pain of Love

Darrell Shook 1978 (North Carolina)



Stop pushing me away,
You know I want to stay.
There is nowhere I rather be,
Why is it so hard for you to see.
Maybe you have stopped caring,
While my heart just keeps tearing.
You said it was us against the world,
Lately it is me left being twirled.
Did you find someone you love more,
Just tell me and I’ll show myself the door.
Do you want us to start something new,
Then stop making me get over you.
The hurt of heartbreak is to much to bare,
When you have found someone so rare.
I don’t understand the things you do,
One thing that is true is I love you.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101 111111 1111101 111111111 1011110 1111110 111110101 101111101 1111111 111011101 111111101 111011101 011111111 1111111 11010111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 564
Words 129
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 428
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Written on October 16, 2023

Submitted by Darrell on December 09, 2023

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