Analysis of My Father’s Already Pleased (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



My Father’s Already Pleased   (Bussokusekika)

Well Alexandra
At least you are attempting
To take your mask off
How long must I live my vow
Of being a Nazarite
My Father’s already pleased

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/04/2023


Scheme A XAXXBB X
Poetic Form
Metre 11001011 1010 1111010 11111 1111111 11001 1100101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 236
Words 41
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I am still a man in the fleshly sense…I enjoy giving sweet Hershey’s kisses to the woman whom I love…Even though I have never been on the receiving end of such sweet delights…I do believe you once told me about it would be your pleasure…And I am a starving Marvin who has an insatiable appetite for a sweet delectable Georgia peach…Shall I go on???I am not very well endowed but I do try to make up for it in the previously mentioned ways…I hope I didn’t make you blush. . 

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Written on December 04, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 04, 2023

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