Analysis of Her Name Would Be Lilith
She would definitely be the queen of my heart,
and she would take that throne from her mother,
whose subject my heart was greatly
and with whom I planned to make fairy tales come true.
She would be an angel, but an even bigger devil,
she would conquer everyone with an innocent smile,
on the wings of her parents' love,
she would fight for her dreams to the end.
She would play the violin or the piano with her mother,
study Bach, Mozart, Beethoven and Liszt;
and with her father she would compose love poetry,
wrote about a love that is as pure as a tear.
It is true that she would have floppy ears to her mother,
but from both of them she would inherit seductive eyes,
she would not leave anyone indifferent,
anyone's heart could skip a beat because of her.
Her name would be Lilith and she would be our joy,
but on her unknown path to life,
through its door she never passed,
instead of the beginning, the end was there for her.
Because this world was not ready for her,
with the elimination of the beginning they killed hope,
I will forever keep the dream of her in my heart,
like the Hesperides golden apples in Hades.
Scheme | ABCX XXXX BXCX BXXB XXXB BXAX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111000101111 0111111010 10111110 011111110111 11111011101010 111010111001 10110101 111101101 1110001100101010 1011010001 0101011011100 101011111101 11111111011010 11111110100101 111110010 10111010110 0111100111101 11001111 1111101 0110010011110 0111111010 10001010010111 1101010110011 1011010010 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,129 |
Words | 239 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 147 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
"Her Name Would Be Lilith" is a poem from a collection of poetry entitled "When you stay alone". If you liked it and want to order your copy of the book, you can through Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/8690558810 Or support my work by buying me a coffee: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/zeraprinc You can also read my other poetry online: https://zeraprinc.com/index.php/poetry
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