Analysis of By The Okd Olive Tree Jewel

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



By The Okd Olive Tree Jewel   (Bussokusekika)

Shall we call a truce
And raise a white flag of peace
Shall we be afraid
If we were to rendezvous
Please do not expect too much
By the old olive tree Jewel

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/1/2023


Scheme X XXXXAX A
Poetic Form
Metre 101101101 11101 0101111 11101 110110 1110111 10110110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 245
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

What did you think of the sonic boom???It’s not every day Elon causes one of those in this neck of the woods…Did you know of course I still love you is the name of the barge where his rockets usually land???Do you have any particular time in mind???I sure hope it is not my imagination playing tricks on me…

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Written on December 01, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 01, 2023

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