Analysis of Who won, you or me?



In this competitive world
There are two things
that are not clear puzzles

One is the state of being incomprehensible that
the man who is going to die will have the next life
Is it right to destroy and live?

Second, The inexplicable condition of everyone should accept the god of his race for the god who does not know whether he exists or not.

Not only birds and animals are the prey for single hunger of survival
Man is also the prey for themselves.
One destroys to live
 If the maturity comes
 Then he sprinkles.
 Loss is always the only thing
 This earth receives.

Who won in the end?
 you or me
 nobody is here.
 who was yesterday is not today.
 who is present today will not be there tomorrow.
The concept is ultimate
 Finally Truth never fails.

Neither Hindu nor Buddhism nor Islam nor Christianity
 All religions say the one thing
 Love everyone
 Be kind to all

If only this happens
This world will have peace
Humanity receives miracles everywhere


Scheme XXA XXB X XXBXACX XDXXXXX DCXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101001 1111 111110 1101110001001 0111101111011 11110101 10001000101101010111110111111010111 11010100101110101010 111001101 10111 1001001 1110 1110101 1101 11001 111 111 11101101 111001111101 0101100 1001101 101110010110100 10101011 110 1111 110110 11111 01000110010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 966
Words 191
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 1, 7, 7, 4, 3
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by drmkannadhasan on November 28, 2023

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