Analysis of Ambrosia

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



I suckled on the nectar
Which exuded from her lips
To me it was ambrosia
Running down my finger tips

‘‘Twas finer than any wine
From any fruit of the vine
And I could hardly believe
That this goddess was all mine

How can one express with words
Such a delectable taste
As a maiden who is fair
Gentle delicate and chaste

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   As IF it were yesterday


Scheme XAXA BBXB XCXC X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 1010101 1111010 1011101 1101101 1101101 0111001 1110111 1110111 1001001 1010111 1010001 10010101111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 391
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

It’s not everyday that a poet reveals his or her innermost thought process…There are many who may perceive this one to be about a sensual sexual experience…Well…There are some things that bring more pleasure to one than just sex…I wrote this one about a certain poetess who held me captivated and mesmerized through her songs…the nectar…Lips her voice…ambrosia the poems I wrote to her in response…fingertips my pen writing…second stanza reaffirming first stanza…As for the third stanza…Use your own creativity…Is there really a major difference between that and which???It’s not everyday a magician reveals his secrets…

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Written on November 27, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on November 27, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on November 27, 2023

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