Analysis of A Love that must be from day one

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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A love that must be from day one

You said hello and I noticed you. I saw your face and the gentleness of your figure and I was blown away. I saw us hand in hand and I knew we needed to be with each other. Until you wore my ring I could not rest and until then my heart would be in shambles. The future of my existence depended on us being together.
You said yes and then my life started.


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Characters 401
Words 85
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 2
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 78
Words per line (avg) 21
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Written on November 19, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on November 19, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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