Analysis of Soul's Map in Your Eyes : Heartbeat's Unveiling Dance



"My darling, behold our entwined destiny -

Two souls adrift in life's tempestuous sea.

Your piercing gaze unveils my innermost light,

Dispelling the shadows of my darkest night.

No other has drawn so close to my spirit's shore,

Nor felt the pulse of my being's innermost core.

With you I'm stripped bare, no facade left to shield

The naked truths from your sight revealed.

My love, my heart, in your eyes I'm laid open wide -

No thought left concealed, no feeling left to hide.

You see me as I am, flaws and all in between,

My inner landscape clear as day to you has been.

I shudder in awe at your discernment so keen,

That not even my soul's crevices lie unseen.

My secrets, my wounds, wishes and dreams -

All bared before your knowing, piercing beams.

With no reservation nor thought of decline,

I welcome your gaze that sees through mine.

So peer, my beloved, into my innermost maze,

And unravel the myst'ries of my soul's haze.

No barrier or block shall obstruct your view,

As you trace my spirit's map - ever faithful and true.

Dive deep in my waters, caress each contour,

Let my essence envelop and immerse you more.

As I open and surrender all that I am,

Have me, know me, till our souls merge as one.

For this gift of transparency I'm grateful beyond words.

In sublime vulnerability my heartbeat echoes yours.

To be so visible brings trembling and fear,

Yet with you, my love, all is safe and clear.

In your light I'm found, by your truth I'm known

And in your heart my naked soul feels home.

So peer, gaze, discern what lies within,

I welcome your sight that sees through my skin.

Our spirits now mingling, dancing as one -

In your eyes I'm seen, recognized, known.  
No need for pretense, disguises or hiding,

With unveiled hearts our future lighter than morning.

My flaws and my glories, all yours to explore -

I revel in your knowing, ask for nothing more.

To be so deeply understood is rapture indeed!

With you I'm fulfilled, no further I need.

So drink in the vista my inner realm displays -

Let my panorama fill your sight for days!

I treasure being truly seen by your heart,

Our intimacy the truest wisdom and art.

Grateful am I for this gift beyond measure -

To be visible, naked, seen without censure.

As deeper you delve, more of me unveiled,

New lands revealed where mystery once prevailed.

Keep peering, probing my spirit's terrain -

All that I am is open to you, nothing to restrain.

No need for facade, pretense or veneer,

Everything's apparent, crystal clear.

So gaze on, beloved, see what lies inside -

I welcome your discernment piercing so wide.

To be so bare, viewed with such clarity,

Is bliss beyond words, sublime vulnerability.

With joy I surrender all that I am to your sights -

My naked soul glowing in your love's light."

The poem is part of a full version found in the book “Homo Sapiens” Part Part I - XVIII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular “Homo Sapiens” book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the “Homo Sapiens” series, as well as other books by the same author.   So, don’t hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores.   Khublei Shihajar Nguh,  (Dhanewad  )(Thank you )


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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 3,459
Words 733
Sentences 38
Stanzas 60
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Lines Amount 61
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 43
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

The poem beautifully expresses a profound connection between two souls, celebrating the transparency and vulnerability found in love. It explores the depth of understanding, the joy of being truly seen, and the intimate dance of souls merging into one. The poet revels in the safety of revealing every facet of their being to their beloved, finding bliss and fulfillment in the profound visibility of their naked soul.

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Written on June 12, 2021

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023

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