Analysis of My Star Burns No More



My life was brightened by your light,
I now sit in the darkness of the night;

Your love to me shown gleaming and sure,
Now I wait for you no more;

The deafening of time marches on for so long,
My eyes are blinded by the memory of your song;

My muse has left me in despair,
I now wait for my last breath of air;

I swirl in that black hole where no light escapes,
A star’s rebirth for whose light I shall wait.


Scheme AA XX BB CC XX
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11110111 1110010101 111111001 1111111 010011101111 1111010100111 11111001 111111111 11011111101 0101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 414
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

This poem describes the loss of my best friend, wife, and the best mom I have ever known.

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Written on October 29, 2023

Submitted by waylandrobert1 on October 29, 2023

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Robert Stephen Wayland

I have lived in many places within the US. The Southern US has been my home for quite some time. Years ago I moved from the city to a rural community in the South where life is quiet. My wife recently passed away and literature and poetry played a large role in her day-to-day life in the last few years. The photo attached was our wedding photo when we were young and full of energy. more…

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