Analysis of I Found Love



I found love
Hanging on a tree
Strung up
For all humanity

I found love
A human whipping post
Of
Flayed flesh
Ripped from bone
And as muscles
Hung in shreds
The word became flesh

“You forgave the iniquity of your people
You covered all their sin.”

Nails,
Drove, hard, relentless pain,
Indiscriminate of bone or flesh
This rag doll
Human form was stretched
Until ligament and tendon tore
But through the searing pain
Of stretched, smashed, shattered sinews
Intercession came

“Father forgive them …”

As I stood
I smelt, the stench
Of my iniquity
Fouler
Than that of excrement
From cruel death’s
Last release
Yet in the final hour
Love whispered

“I have swept away your offenses like a cloud
Your sins like the morning mist.”

A spear, stabbed
Twisted turned
And as entrails spewed
From a ruptured side
The authority, to forgive men their sins
Flowed, upon the Earth
In an unending crimson tide
So came
Death’s slow time march
Of agony
In death’s last breath
Love sighed

“Forgive, as you have been forgiven!”

At this sight
What remaining right
Have I?
Not to set my prisoners free
Manacled by unyielding principles
Chained
By past’s resentments and
Heart’s bitter, hurts.
Held captive
In the dungeon deep
Of my unforgiving heart
What right have I?
Not to set my prisoners free

I forgive
I forgive
Those who sought to hurt
Those, near and dear to me
I forgive
Those who wrapped me in suspicion’s cloak
I forgive
Those who sent their words
With poisoned arrow, sting
I forgive
Those who through the long years
Have sought to dominate, manipulate, control
Those who have belonged to me

I forgive
I kneel
On this blood soaked ground
My hands clutching
Clotted grass and dirt
My cheeks grazed by splintered wood
My senses filled
Will the stench of butchered flesh
My tears mingled
With blood’s unending drip
I forgive
I forgive
I set my captives free.

I kneel on this blood soaked,
Stenching ground.
I watch as thorns,’
Cruel claws,
Rip and tear at tender flesh.
Thus, is a Sovereign crowned.
And
Each sweated blood drop cries

“I am he, who blots out your transgressions
And remembers your sins no more.”

But
On this blood soaked battle ground
Heart’s bitter hurt, still in anger fights
Yet
To this battle ground
Love’s warrior,
Gladly came.
So I must surrender
My stubborn will.
I will,
I must,
Forgive.

Because,
I found love.
Love, that keeps no record of wrongs,
Hanging on a tree.
Strung up,
Not just for all humanity,
But for you
And
Me


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 10101 11 110100 111 010101 1 11 111 0110 101 01011 101001001110 110111 1 110101 001001111 111 10111 011000101 110101 111101 0101 10011 111 1101 110100 1 111100 1101 101 1001010 110 111011010101 1110101 011 101 01101 10101 00100101111 10101 01010101 11 1111 1100 0111 11 011111010 111 10101 11 11111001 11010100 1 110100 1101 110 00101 1100101 1111 11111001 101 101 11111 110111 101 111100101 101 11111 110101 101 111011 1111001001 1110111 101 11 11111 1110 10101 1111101 1101 1011101 1110 110101 101 101 111101 111111 11 1111 101 1011101 110101 0 110111 1111111010 00101111 1 1111101 110110101 1 11101 1100 101 111010 1101 11 11 01 01 111 11110111 10101 11 11110100 111 0 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 2,491
Words 477
Sentences 17
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 2, 9, 1, 9, 2, 12, 1, 13, 13, 13, 8, 2, 12, 9
Lines Amount 118
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem was written in October 2005. It was one of a number of personal meditations that I wrote, as I struggled to deal with a painful chapter of my life, and the break down of a number of familial relationships.

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Written on October 20, 2005

Submitted by nfowke on October 16, 2023

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