Analysis of I AM



I am the original divine being.
Little of my presence awake the universes,
Even the earth could be lonely without me.

I am creative.
Thou pourth lemon, i turned it to lemon juice.
You went behind to plug more fruits; why i tastes so good to be kept.
Is it my feminine body when I walked in the room with smlie, wearing my full cup of confident?

So magnificent  and elegant.
Ethereal beauty that cannot be found else where.
Only kings could recognized the queens!

I am every man's dream
Your home is blessed because of how I handled it perfectly.
You begged for me into your life, then I stayed.

I chose peace for you when you made up mind to unite with me.
I could go, I could stay but I choose you anyway .
I am your radiant!
So guide me now before I loose it.

I could stay with you if, only you make peace to every women you once were.
We are lit, as bright as the moon.
Treat us with respect, then I reward you.

I am in charge ,
I will paint the stars/moon over your skin to be more reserved.

I am bold .
I am eloquent.
I am ambitious.
I am gorgeous.
You kept wondering why I succeed?
I listens to my heart, work hard for it, then
Achieved them all.

You can call me fat, skinny or ugly.
It is your opinion to yourself
You win the moment I accept it but guess what?
I do not care,
So, I am not that.

I am that female  child!


Scheme XXA XXXB BCX XAX AXBX XXX XX XBDDXXX AXXCX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11001000110 101110010100 10011110011 11010 11101111101 1101111111111111 1111001011100111101111100 101000100 0100101101111 10111001 1110011 111101111101100 11110111111 11111111111111 111111111110 111100 111101111 11111110111110010110 11111101 1110111011 1101 111011101111101 111 11100 11010 1110 111001101 11011111111 0111 1111110110 111010101 110101011111 1111 11111 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,354
Words 310
Sentences 30
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 3, 4, 3, 2, 7, 5, 1
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem illustrates specifically about women out there..being themselves and being strong even though things seems to be hard on them. Know you are important and don't allow viewers determine who you are not .

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Submitted by chidinmablessingmazi on October 31, 2023

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Chidinma Eke-mazi B.H

Good morning, I want to say thank you for giving me privilege to share one of a kind thought of mine, in" Poetry contest ". My names are Eke-mazi Chidinma B.H, from Abia State , Nigeria but based in port-Harcourt. I graduated this year as a pubic administration student .I have hobbies and my hobabies are , Writing poem, stories , and listening to songs. These are the things I enjoy doing whenever I'm less busy. I am fun loving person with a good sense of humor. One thing about me that is important to know people first from afar before approaching them. Althoug at first I come as a very shy individualistic sometimes but once I get to know people and comfortable with my environment I am great. it’s great and I am all different. I joke, laugh and humor people and I also get as much as I give. I am a very kind, compassionate, sensitive people. So I enjoy being around with pure intentional people. more…

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