Analysis of Angels

Mom 1990 (Li)



got your wings
I cried when you left
I lost my breathe
Trying to reach you
I fell beneath you
I feel you hands close to my chest
You say one more breathe
I look to the left
You're no where
 To be found
I realize
It is my imagination
I just want you around
It's not possible
You're a angel now


Scheme ABCDDECBFGHIGJK
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Metre 111 11111 1111 10111 11011 11111111 11111 11101 111 111 110 1110010 111101 11100 10101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 304
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 227
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

This poem about losing my mom 1yr ago I kept waking up after losing my mom thinking it was just a dream she was still here it's a year she isn't still here she was my best friend and my everything

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Written on October 10, 2023

Submitted by kristymiller011890 on October 10, 2023

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