Analysis of Fate's Gentle Whisper : Hearts as Our Compass



Our eyes lock across the room, a jolt goes through me
This feeling, so sudden yet profound, what could it be?
That spark, that chemistry, it sets my soul alight
Your smile makes my heart take flight, my darling sight.

I've dreamt of this moment, when our paths would cross
Yet never dared hope, until now, for this gift - at what cost?
Fate brought us together, now destiny calls
To explore these feelings, before the chance falls.

The touch of your hand on mine, thrills me to my core
I've yearned for your laughter, your voice I've longed to hear more
Together we'll walk through this world, side by side
Sheltered in each other's arms, trusting our hearts as guide.

Life gifts us this treasure, this love we now share
A sacred bond neither time nor troubles can impair
We'll weather the storms as one, our strength renewed
Knowing through it all, my beloved, I have you.

So take my hand and let's begin our journey today
The adventures we'll share, no words can convey
I'll be your companion, whatever may come
With you here, always, forever, I'm home.

The years may bring changes we cannot foresee
But of this I am certain, your heart stays with me
Grey hairs and wrinkles, we'll take in our stride
Growing old together, still loving, still side by side.

You are my world now, the moon, stars and sun
Life without you would be no life, the joy would be gone
Stay by my side now, until our last breath
I want you beside me, even in death.

Our bond is eternal, not even grave can part
For you live in me, imprinted on my heart and soul  
Until the end of time and beyond, you make me whole.

My days were lonely before you entered my life
Each moment dragged by, filled only with strife
The future seemed bleak, my heart cloaked in sorrow
Until you lit up my world, bringing joy with each new tomorrow.

Together we'll nurture the love between us
Watching it grow stronger, more precious than gold
We'll build dreams and memories we'll forever hold dear
Sheltered in each other's arms, there's nothing left to fear.

Through life's ups and downs, through laughter and tears
Hand in hand we will go, calming each other's fears
Each moment a treasure, our own world to shape
Filled with whispers and touches our passion won't escape.

As seasons change around us, you remain my constant
Together through autumn, winter, summer and spring
Whether rain or shine, you are my everything.

So let's abandon fear and worries of the past  
To new horizons, new adventures, together we'll cast
The future is ours, the present a gift we share
My heartbeat echoes yours, our joy fills the air.

You are my safe harbor, my compass, guiding star
With you I'm complete, life perfect as it is
Each moment with you, eternal bliss.

Stay ever by my side, my love will never fade
Growing stronger, unwavering, never swayed
Together we'll write our story, this journey we share
My heart is yours now, forever, beyond all compare.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,925
Words 559
Sentences 17
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

This heartfelt poem beautifully captures the journey of two souls finding each other, the profound connection they share, and the promise of a love that endures through time. It speaks of the joy, strength, and unwavering bond that define their relationship, promising a life filled with love, joy, and adventure.

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Written on August 05, 2023

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 04, 2023

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