Analysis of Phoenix's Dance: The Masquerade of Choice and Flight
The masquerade of masks we don, a polished sheen
That hides our truest face behind facade serene
A prideful ego's desperate pantomime for all
To see the role, not soul beneath the costume's gall
What fuels this vain veneer of virtues we profess
That shame the timid into muted wordlessness?
Perchance we mask our risk of living free and true
And peddle moral myths for those who never flew
Like fledglings caged, we mock the soaring eagles' flight
And say "See here, be safe, be still, avoid their plight"
For if they fall, we secretly smile, relieved
That caution we prescribed was truly believed
Yet part of us still yearns to try those reckless wings
To know the joy and pain experience brings
So when they crash, we point and say "Behold the cost!"
To squash our envious awe for their adventure lost
For who are we to judge another's chosen fate?
Each has their path, their purpose to create
Your fall may spur my rise to take a bold leap
My safety net could steal your chance to soar so deep
So rather than resent your courageous choice
I'll praise your spirit and find my own true voice
Perhaps our lives converge in inspiration's spark
Your fire fuels my light amid the swirling dark
For in extinguishing another's brightest flame
We lose our own ignition to do the same
Yet hand in hand we fan each other's embers
And set the sky aglow in dazzling colors
So I release all need for your defeat
And bless the purpose that we separately meet
Our threads, though spun apart, weave one tapestry
Of wisdom gained through all humanity
Each loss and triumph ripples out through all
Instructive echoes bouncing off time's wall
To catch and build upon another's test
Experience gleaned from those who tried their best
For no success or failure ever stands alone
Each builds momentum spinning life's unknowns
So rather than resent another's hard won crown
I'll stand in awe at how their courage shook life down
And never wish for your fall, my friend
For kindred hearts beat beneath each journey's end
Your soaring stirs my longings to be free
To choose my flight beyond security
So when you leap boldly to your highest height
I will cheer each moment of your wild flight
And if you plunge to earth in blazing flames
I'll remember still the daring that you claimed
For phoenixes we are, rising from our ash
Wiser for the burns and falls that force a crash
You showed me I could choose a bolder way
By not resenting yours, but blessing your okay
So fly, oh fly my friend on fearless wings
And I will strive to find courage in your things
Our loops may meet again in destiny's繭dance
A stronger Self emerged from taking that bold chance
For in releasing envy's shackles on my soul
I expand the beauty that makes humanity whole
Not chained by others' risks that I was too afraid
But freed to honor the sacred choice we each made
Then win or lose, our lives sing inspiration's song
Stirring courage in each heart where it belongs
The cosmos celebrates each being's highest right
To blaze their trail through darkness into light
So I release imposed limits on another's joy
And kerneled within, my truth I now employ
To nurture actions aligned with all I am
Beyond confines of fear's paralysis, I expand
Ever outward, forward, like a fern unfurled
I embrace my portion of this whirling world
Part of me may wince when bold ones meet defeat
But deeper wisdom knows their fall holds lessons sweet
For phoenixes we are, rising with more light
If we release resentment at another's flight
Your crashing flames could be my launch to dare
If I but feel the freedom you hoped to share
So now I see how loss can spur me to risk more
And how my soaring stirs the hearts longing to soar
Our orbits interweave as each plays out their part
Inspiring others' greatness, Fire of Heart to Heart
Thus we need not lose for one to win
Each victory and defeat reveal where to begin
To let go fears that bind potential's seeds
And spur new growth to blossom from what one needs
For envy cannot see how all are interlaced
Your stumble makes my standing sure-footed in this place
Your triumph lifts this traveler to reach new peaks
My small wins germinate the faith others seeks
So may we bless the purpose in each victory and fall
Knowing together we answer humanity's call
To lend a hand when one is shaken from their course
And celebrate each triumph leading to a richer Source
The web of life - none win or lose alone
But play their part in cosmic currents unknown
So may we reckless risk to ride those swirling tides
Exulting in the beauty however fate decides
To lock another down brings bondage to oneself
But setting them free ignites one's own truth to unfurl
So now I shed all need for your defeat
And stand in awe at your wild longing to complete
Your timeless essence, like mine, forever remains whole
No loss or win can make or break your soul
But O how you have stirred me from my paralyzed state
By shining bright and bold, defiant of prescribed fate!
So fly, oh fly, my friend on fearless wings
And I will strive to find courage in your things
To honor the sacred CHOICE that makes us most free
Not resenting ITs, but finding ME
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (74%) |
Metre | 00111110101 1110101010101 011101011 11011101011 1101101110101 1101001101 0111101110101 010101111101 11111010101 011111110111 11111100101 11010111001 111111111101 11010101001 111111010101 11101001110101 111111010101 1111110101 11111111011 110111111111 11010110101 11110011111 0110101011 1101011010101 100100010101 111010101101 11011111010 010101010010 1101111101 010101110001 101110111100 1101110100 1101010111 0101010111 1101010101 01001111111 110111010101 1101010101 110101010111 110111110111 010111111 1101101111 1101110111 1111010100 11111011101 1111101111 0111110101 10101010111 1111101101 10101011101 1111110101 11010111011 1111111101 01111110011 1011101011 010101110111 10010110111 1010101101001 111101111101 111100101111 1111101111 10100111101 01010110101 1111110011 1101011010101 0101111101 11010011111 011110100101 10101010101 10111011101 11111111101 110101111101 111110111 110101010101 1101111111 11110101111 111111111111 011101011011 101001111111 0101010101111 111111111 1100001011101 11111111 01111101111 11010111101 1101110110011 110111001111 1111001101 11110100110001 1001011001001 110111110111 0101101010101 0111111101 11110101001 111101111101 01000101011 11010111011 1101101111101 1111111101 010111110101 1101011010011 1111111111 111111111101 1101010101011 1111111101 01111110011 110010111111 101011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 5,249 |
Words | 997 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 27 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 108 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 152 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
This poem reflects on the masks people wear and the envy or judgment they may feel towards others who take risks or pursue their dreams. It encourages a more supportive and empathetic approach, recognizing that each person's journey is unique and can inspire others to find their own courage and authenticity. The poem suggests that rather than resenting or wishing for someone else's defeat, we should celebrate their bold choices and find our own path to freedom and fulfillment. It emphasizes the interconnectedness of all lives and the power of inspiration and kindness in the human experience. more »
Written on July 06, 2013
Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 04, 2023
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