Analysis of Our Fortress



God is our refuge and strength,
Very present help in trouble;
To persevere at any length,
That pulls us out of the rubble.

Therefore, we will not need to fear,
Although the earth may be removed;
No matter it might seem severe,
Because of God, we have behooved.

The mountains may move to the sea,
As the water roars up with foam;
Trembling mountains swelling will be,
The Lord assures safety at home.

A river whose streams make you glad,
At the temple of the Most High;
Without stress, nothing makes us sad,
No worries as a cause to cry.

The Lord is in the midst of her,
She is stable and not be moved;
God will help when dawn does occur,
Assures that all has been improved.

Kingdoms totter as nations rage,
His voice utters as the earth fades;
For a new earth setting the stage,
The saints enter the palisades.

The Lord of Hosts has come with us,
God of Jacob is the fortress;
And who is the refuge as thus,
To comfort us in our stress.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 983
Words 219
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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God Is Our Refuge Psalm 46:1-7

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Written on November 05, 2023

Submitted by richardnsherrer on November 04, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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