Analysis of "Go away tears"
Lenamarie Clark 1981 (Indianapolis,Indiana)
I don't want to close my eyes
I don't want to see those dreams
I want to stop the pain
I'm afraid someday, I will break my vein
lord help me I'm going insane.
Seeking help makes me feel weak,
my life is bleak.
I talk to them daily, and I beg them to go away,
they make me want to jump when I hear the Choo choo...
I miss seeing her face, it's now replaced...
Gone forever, and i keep sinking deeper and deeper I weap for her smile in the mirror..
My tears are lost
I don't want to wake up,I will be shaken up
Let me go, please let me go tears...
| Scheme | XXA AA BB XX X X XXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1111111 1111111 111101 101111111 11111001 1011111 1111 11111001111101 111111111011 111001111 10100111010010111010010 1111 11111111101 11111111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 573 |
| Words | 136 |
| Sentences | 7 |
| Stanzas | 7 |
| Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 3 |
| Lines Amount | 14 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 58 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 16 |
About this poem
I wrote this about my self and the pain ptsd has on me. There's more of myself I dare to share,my poems tell my story.
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Written on November 02, 2023
Submitted by PoetFeather on November 02, 2023
Modified by PoetFeather on November 03, 2023
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