Analysis of NY street scam



crash send food flying
once guilty mind got thick skin
walk on with a smile


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Haiku 
Tercet 
Metre 11110 1101111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 75
Words 15
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I wrote this happy haiku after some guys tryed to unsucessfully pull a super old scam on me today. Those guys are going around, bumping into unsuspecting people. One will drop his to-go box on the ground after bumping into you. They both get mad and demand money. Then one scoops up the food off the ground to “clean up” while the other collects your money to pay for the food. Time to show the middle finger and keep walking. I wont be that guy, not today not tomorrow.

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Written on October 31, 2023

Submitted by westphal.tom on October 31, 2023

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