Analysis of What if...



What if I cultivated stars instead of whispering your name
What if I forget to remember you today and feel more sane

What if I communicated with the crows
What if I sensed the magic of the crossroads

What if I danced under the moon
What if I evoked the wisdom of the crone

What if I listened to the truth of my heart
What if I stopped pulling myself apart

What if I believed in my own voice
What if I made the dangerous choice

What if I stopped being so effing “nice”
What if I cultivated stars instead of my vice


Scheme XX XX XX AA BB CC
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 111100101110011 1110110101010111 1110100101 1111010101 11111001 11101010101 11110101111 111110101 111010111 111101001 111110111 111100101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 525
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

I am taking a poetry class and our assignment was to create our own poetic form. I am not sure what I will call this form but here it goes...

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Written on October 13, 2023

Submitted by Kaytee on October 17, 2023

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