Analysis of Farewell To Summer



Farewell To Summer

You drop my heart off a cliff
Saying it’s over
Without a chance of saving
And forever dies
As a tattoo on my wrist
Marking your lie
And the fatal error
My choosing you becomes.

Leaving is the longest way
Saying a goodbye
With only one way to go
As eternity fades
Living shades of colorful hues
Pale as phony words,
Gestures and kisses
Your lips made into poison.

I say farewell to summer
Waving so long to go
Where sadness dries in the Sun
After torrential rain
A thousand deaths aren’t enough
For you to pay the price of
The million little pieces
You turn love into ruin.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A XAXXXBAX XBCXXXDE ACEXXXDE XA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1111101 10110 0101110 00101 1001111 1011 001010 110101 1010101 1001 1101111 101001 10111001 11101 10010 1110110 111110 101111 1101001 100101 01011001 1111011 0101010 1110110 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 860
Words 165
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

The end of romance and a relationship

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Written on October 08, 2023

Submitted by charlesyork14 on October 09, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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