Analysis of The soul of the forgotten



In the depths of my soul, 
There lies an emptiness, 
A void that I can't fill, 
No matter how hard I press. 

It's like a black hole, 
A vacuum that sucks me in, 
And the more that I struggle, 
The more I'm swallowed within. 

I try to fill it with people, 
With laughter, love, and light, 
But nothing seems to stay, 
And it always fades from sight. 

So I sit with this emptiness, 
And I make it my friend, 
For in its dark embrace, 
I find a peace that doesn't end. 
For it reminds me that I'm human, 
And that I'm not alone, 
That we all have our emptiness, 
And it's okay to let it be shown. 

So if you too feel the void, 
The emptiness deep within, 
Just know that you're not broken, 
And that it's okay to let it out.

Without you, i feel incomplete
i am trying to  fall in temptations w you

Silence are my words
tears is my pain
hate is my strength
a broken heart from a distance
does my existence matter?
sleepless nights
terrible nightmares
a painful and miserable human life and what comes after death

a desirable puzzle
lost in the distance
an overdose of pills
weeks of starvation
months in coma
fear in my eyes
hate in my soul
what's  lost is now found!


Scheme ABXX ACDC DEXE BFXFGHBH XCGX XX XXXIXXXX DIXGXXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 001111 111100 011111 1101111 11011 0101110 0011110 0111001 11111110 110101 110111 011111 11111100 011111 101101 11011101 110111110 011101 111110100 01111111 1111101 0100101 1111110 01111111 01111001 11101100101001 10111 1111 1111 01011010 1101010 101 1001 01001000101011101 0010010 10010 11011 11010 1010 1011 1011 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,228
Words 287
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 8, 4, 2, 8, 8
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

The poem is about a void that cannot be filled by existing "love". The eco silence of a room as you seem to smile from a distance, tears is you nightmares and laughter in the dreams. It connects touches in our hearts and love in disguise. Black (darkness) shows power

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Written on May 20, 2023

Submitted by matichimwala63 on September 01, 2023

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Matilda Tiana

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