Analysis of May growth set you free



Growing up my eyes and hears gathered a sinful life, brainwashed into what I thought was right,
I’d catch myself wondering off in my beautiful mind with curious thoughts,  feeling left behind, the things I seen, the things I heard, the things I felt were  damaging to an innocent heart, I was thirsty for love in a nurturing way, to find myself  in situations not knowing how to pray, which led me down a road  that I didn’t belong, oh hear we go another sad love song, My heart needed a surgeon, my soul needle a friend, So I ran to my father again and again,
As I wondered lost into a place called nature I begin to hear a calming voice say, you are my child Who I love with all my heart, close your eyes we will never be apart, he then said, now begin to breathe as your mind wonders in ease, no more hurt no more pain dont look back, there’s no need to fear,
I’m your Heavenly Father I’m here
Your growth as set you free…. Only thing left is the memory. My father said Come to me, come to me today is your day, I will hold your hand as I guide your life in a righteous way..


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Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
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About this poem

I never really write poems. I’m not even a writer, but the day I felt like I was going to die and I wanted to in my life I started searching for God I was 38 years old suffered, severe trauma, dealing with me emotionally and physically sick. I laid in bed and cried. I asked God to help me show me what I’m doing wrong show me how to be loved, and I just wrote this. It just poured out with no editing just instant thoughts of what was on my heart.

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Written on March 22, 2022

Submitted by dreadanielle1982 on September 19, 2023

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Andrea Fry

I’m just a girl who’s learning life trying to except all the hurt and pain from others but I know there’s joy out there and I will continue to seek for what is right and what is true. My heart is empathetic, compassionate, understanding, and extremely loving. Being heard will let your light shine bright. more…

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