Analysis of His Own Champion



Surrounded by splendor
what magic there must lie
all wonders of the world
all stars and universe beyond -
a shroud stands still.

Like the great black hole
not engulfing all matter
but destroyer of dreams
projecting thought into rot, turned in on himself
full of disease for which there is none
the master, creator, of self-demise.

At the doors of oblivion
facing eater of souls
the greatest monster
his own reflection.
But now splendor is gone
he cannot see
tearing apart, his own flesh and bone
compelled to suffer, and die alone.


Scheme AXXXX XAXXBX BXABXXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 010110 110111 110101 1101001 0111 10111 1010110 101011 010101110101 110111111 0100101101 10110100 101011 01010 11010 111011 1101 100111101 011100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 533
Words 98
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 8
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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The mind of anxiety, fear, confusion, creating suffering.

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Written on September 07, 2023

Submitted by tomsocial2023 on September 07, 2023

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