Analysis of We all notice her walk

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



As she walks by angels are walking behind her. Although it seems like I'm not her speed I just like being close to her. When she's near things with me calm down and open up. It's like she floats when she walks because she kicks up no street dust. All the goodness falls in behind her and all get out of her way forward. Her path forward stays clear not out of fear but out of gentle respect. All troubling thoughts leave my mind when I'm near her and all that matters is an even settling of the heart and soul. What is she all about I don't know but I do know I'm going to find out because I'm in a good place when I stay close to her.


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Words 130
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Stanzas 1
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Written on October 04, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on October 04, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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