Analysis of Introspectively Speaking



Introspectively speaking.
After awakening to now keep in prospective,
My own foolish unconsciousness...
Once kept to not accept myself to believe,
I could be used to be someone else's fool.
With this to do as a choice to choose.
Yet not expect,
Those steps I took to decide and take...
Would eventually reflect,
My movements made validated a stupidity.
And today,
To have displayed nothing but an idiot.
Performed to portray in the best way done?
I have stopped to observe and listen to watch.
Others doing better,
Than I would or could to myself admit...
I had actually attempted to compete,
With morons.
Seeking amongst themselves to be imbeciles.
And today,
So happy I am...
To be regarded as just another fool.
Doing boring stuff.
And going about my business.
As an undercover common sense thinker.
With a mind to use.
In these days the few who do it,
Are rumored and gossiped to be crazed.
And that found to find normalized,
Has me finally feeling blessed.
No longer do I feel a fool.
Subjected to ridicule.
When competing in a field full of idiots.
With the expertise and skills,
I was not blessed by God to have.
Yes.
I now can openly confess,
I would rather be a fool.
Than a wanna be idiot.
Imitating the best moron around to be!
Introspectively speaking and happy about it.

'So...
You're saying,
To admit...
You are no longer dumb?'

'Well...
I did get married twice.
So I can not honestly say,
I am cured and have completely recuperated.
Still I remain a work in progress.
I am a fool.
To have done dumb and stupid stuff.
Although,
None yet can I say I confess to regret!
Like you I do have temptations.'


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 110 1001001110010 1110100 1111011101 1111111101 111110111 1101 11111101 10100001 1101100000100 001 11011011100 0110100111 11110101011 101010 111111101 11100010101 11 10010111100 001 11011 11010110101 10101 01001110 1101010110 10111 01101111 11001111 0111110 11100101 11011101 010110 101000111100 100101 11111111 1 11110001 1110101 10101100 1000110111 110010011 1 110 101 111101 1 111101 11111001 111010100100 11010101 1101 11110101 1 11111101101 11111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,616
Words 349
Sentences 41
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 41, 4, 10
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 416
Words per stanza (avg) 97
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Written on October 03, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on October 03, 2023

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