Analysis of What Gain In Her Demise.( The unknown)

Esiobu Chisikamdi Vivian 2002 (Anambra state)



What Gain In Her Demise

I want to live just like every
other creatures
but life isn't worth living
as I gain nothing from my want.

She wants nothing but happiness
peace and joy
how will she have all this
when you won't let her be.

Finally she's gone
nothing could be compared to
what you've done her
what have you gained.

She's no more
you have no one to paint
when drunk
to box with when angry
to lash out when hungry.

You wished she lives
she always wished she leaves
you miss her
but she missed life

It's all your fault
you know she hadn't known
that life with you would be
a bed of thorn .
a hell on earth
and doesn't worth living.

You know she doesn't know
that you only  smile when
she's with the money
she's made the meal
without your earn
and at mid nights.

You know she doesn't know
that life with you
would have led her to the unknown.


Scheme x axbx xxxa xcdx xxxaa xxdx xeaxxb Fxaxxx Fce
Poetic Form
Metre 110001 111111100 1010 1110110 11110111 11101100 101 111111 111101 10011 1011011 1110 1111 111 111111 11 111110 111110 1111 11111 110 1111 1111 111101 111111 0111 0111 010110 111101 111011 11010 1101 0111 0111 111101 1111 11101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 859
Words 188
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 6, 6, 3
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

What Gain in her demise speaks of the life of a woman who lives as a slave in her marital home.

Font size:
 

Written on September 21, 2023

Submitted by kamdiesiobu on September 20, 2023

1:00 min read
16

Esiobu Chisikamdi Vivian

Esiobu Chisikamdi Vivian is a poet, author and aswell a prolific writer with numerous talents . She's a graduate of Jobitech Institution Nigeria. more…

All Esiobu Chisikamdi Vivian poems | Esiobu Chisikamdi Vivian Books

3 fans

Discuss this Esiobu Chisikamdi Vivian poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "What Gain In Her Demise.( The unknown)" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 11 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/169304/what-gain-in-her-demise.%28-the-unknown%29>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    20
    days
    4
    hours
    21
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "School Boy" as a part of the poetry collection entitled "Songs of Experience"?
    A Walt Whitman
    B Robert Frost
    C William Blake
    D William Wordworth