Analysis of And They’ve Their Pillars Of It (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



And They’ve Their Pillars Of It   (Bussokusekika)

Keep my prize Father
Mankind is not deserving
I don’t want to share
New Jerusalem with them
They have built their perfect world
And they’ve their pillars of it

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   9/20/2023


Scheme A XAXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 01110111 11110 1111010 11111 1010011 1111011 0111011 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 259
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I am having problems getting to sleep tonight and this one popped into my head…Trauma in one’s past can haunt a person their entire life…I had to relieve a very haunting one yesterday and I don’t know how long it will take me to get over it…I had problems falling asleep Monday night due to the thought of my appointment yesterday…Oh well…Thus is life…MST Ptsd sucks… As IF there really is a New Jerusalem and such…I guess that mankind truly believes that this utopia they have created really is the New Jerusalem mentioned in the Holy Bible…

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Written on September 20, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on September 20, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on September 20, 2023

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