Analysis of Time portal

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Every star in heaven in chorus
lays a path before us

Perfect passing moments
following golden sunsets

Creating subdued seduction

Bathing our minds eye
with a magnificent glow

A show which calls
the reflecting golden sun

In a ghostly sheen
calling forth the stars

As if from a dream shared
with ancestral souls

focused upwards
into the skies

Lovingly surrendered
to prayers for better lives

If not for better chances

as soular winds sing
All across eternity…

time for all dreams

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Scheme AA XX B XX XB XX XX XX XX X XX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1001010010 101011 011010 100101 01001010 101011 1001001 0111 0010101 00101 10101 111011 10101 1010 0101 100010 111101 1111010 1111 1010100 1111 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 555
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on 2005

Submitted by Charles2 on September 16, 2023

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