Analysis of Tattoo, +in your eyes



i am so, mad about you
Whatever it is you have going for you

There is is something certainly special about you
Does magical things to me like no other can do

Drawing me closer with a familiar ring

Bringing a renewed sense,
a kind of alternate reality

a positive attraction that underlies
The truth in us as elemental beings,

i feel it in all our many interactions
not just your style and your grace

You give me a sense of satisfaction
i have never felt before.

When another man approaches you
i am ready for war

It’s in your smile, even in the many looks that
Come across your face.

No doubt about it, it’s in your walk
the way you talk How you roll your eyes’

Things you do to me, whenever we make love
i feel i always have a way with you

We can talk about anything.
 Once, i had a taste of you

it made me forget everything

i ever knew about,
anything else, but you.

You’ve got my attention
In time and in life

give me a loving, so baad
It put me under your spell,

with an ecstasy

It is almost as if
i wear a permanent smile,

Tattooed on my face

You’ve got me worked up so
i can’t forget that very first taste

not to mention the way you randomly
hit me every day

with those, little happy surprises
You do it so well, naturally

even when you get mad as hell
it’s in your everything.

If you were to act
Like a bitch, no doubt-the queen

if you know What i mean.

A compilation of all of the best
Things about a woman that i ever wanted to see

Coming together between you and me
Maybe it’s just emotional tides

your oceans of love churning
got me running for cover.

Please, don’t you ever stop
what you are doing to me

i am a hotcake fresh, off your gridle
A steak on your grill

Sometimes i feel like when we fight,
We could battle for days,

but i never will

i would rather give in to you
more often than not

When i am away from you,
dreaming of making love

Kissing you. i can’t even sleep at night,
bad as i am missing you

Thinking of you, constantly
i always need a fix,

another shot just like a junkie
i need to feel you close to me,

burning in my blood

Until the ice water in my veins
turns lava hot

You’ve got my world endlessly turning,
i can feel it All around you and me

Washing away all traces of misery i have ever felt,
got me so hot You’ve started global warming

Even the polar icecaps in me
have begun to melt

In tides of intimate mystery
returning to me with joy

And even so, baby i am just like a fish in your sea
You’ve got me hooked Hard as i may try to fight it
i
 have strong will, somehow you are taking control
Almost beyond belief, remember you heard it from me

Maybe so, it’s a quality of your compassion,
which is affecting me so effectively,

i want to scream, aloud, i love you, baby
Each time you call, whenever we meet

you set in motion such powerful chain reactions in me,
it gets me so worked up i cry,

Sometimes, i cannot even sleep
Awakening within me, a sense of devotion,

making you hit the jackpot
With me every time

i surrender, you win
Again and again,

You are running a streak
that never seems to end

i can’t seem to stop you
from pulling the trigger to my emotions,

you keep setting me off

You’ve sprung the trapdoor to my heart
and started it afire

when ten thousand angels
Could not even dream

to create the spark in my heart felt desire
the way you keep taking me higher,

Making me feel so inspired
Things will never be the same again,

i’m done wasting time, playing foolish games.
You have achieved this miracle so effortlessly,

i tip my hat for you. You have the means,
whenever we get together

you Get me all steamed up You churn my milk
and turn it all to cream. You work me up so easily

With a majesty many have sought few can attain
To be without your loving presence is Hell

Whatever it is that destiny holds
For me and you

One thing holds true

i can never, seem to be
Able to

Get enough
Of you   

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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 4,041
Words 913
Sentences 12
Stanzas 66
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 5, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 125
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 46
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Written on 2015

Submitted by Charles2 on September 14, 2023

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