Analysis of Her eyes so bright

Phoku 2011 (england)



The glinting sunset,
Leaving a deep orange sky
Her eyes shone so bright


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Haiku 
Tercet 
Metre 0101 1001101 01111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 71
Words 14
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 13

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My first try at a haiku.

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Written on September 12, 2023

Submitted by milopeace on September 12, 2023

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