Analysis of There's a dream I have portrayed

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There's a dream I have portrayed
I believed that it could come true.
Now, I'm enslaved.
To fall in love with a dream. What a fool.

There is everyday fuss, and reality is gray.
From bad thoughts, it distracts.
But darkness follows every day.
And again and again, we walk under the stars.

Just cause she is with me, I'm glad.
She's happy just because I am with her.
I say: "We will never part".
"Don't even dare think about it", she's saying in return.

I'm drifting off to sleep with a grin.
After all, I know we'll be dancing all night again.
And only the alarm clock's damn ring
Can part me with her for the whole day.

Нарисовал мечту,
Поверил, может сбыться,
Я у нее теперь в плену,
Глупец какой, в мечту влюбиться.
Реальность серая, да будней суета,
Чуть отвлекает от ненастных мыслей,
Но каждый день сменяет темнота,
И вновь и вновь под звездами гуляем мы с ней.
Я счастлив, что она со мной,
Она лишь потому, что я с ней,
Я говорю: Мы не расстанемся с тобой,
Она: О расставанье думать даже ты не смей.
Я улыбаюсь, погружаясь в сон,
Ведь знаю, что опять всю ночь будем кружиться в танце,
И только лишь будильника проклятый звон,
Сможет заставить меня, с ней на целый день расстаться.


Scheme XXXX AXAX XXXX XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 10111111 1101 1101101101 11101101011 111101 110101001 001001111001 11111111 1101011110 1111101 11011011110001 110111101 1011111101101 010001111 111101011 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,631
Words 251
Sentences 19
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 16
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 44

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Just cause she is with me, I'm glad. She's happy just because I am with her.

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Written on January 01, 2012

Submitted by Starry_Tuta on September 09, 2023

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