Analysis of Part II: The Fields of Coleraine



On the fields of Col'raine there'll be labour in vain
Before the Great Western is ended,
The nags will have toil'd, and the silks will be soil'd.
And the rails will require to be mended.

For the gullies are deep, and the uplands are steep,
And mud will of purls be the token,
And the tough stringy-bark, that invites us to lark,
With impunity may not be broken.

Though Ballarat's fast, and they say he can last,
And that may be granted hereafter,
Yet the judge's decision to the Border division
Will bring neither shouting nor laughter.

And Blueskin, I've heard that he goes like a bird,
And I'm told that to back him would pay me ;
He's a good bit of stuff, but not quite good enough,
'Non licuit credere famae.'

Alfred ought to be there, we all of us swear
By the blood of King Alfred, his sire ;
He's not the real jam, by the blood of his dam,
So I shan't put him down as a flyer.

Now, Hynam, my boy, I wish you great joy,
I know that when fresh you can jump, sir ;
But you'll scarce be in clover, when you're ridden all over,
And punish'd from shoulder to rump, sir.

Archer goes like a shot, they can put on their pot,
And boil it to cover expenses ;
Their pot will boil over, the run of his Dover
He'll never earn over big fences.

There's a horse in the race, with a blaze on his face,
And we know he can gallop a docker !
He's proved himself stout, of his speed there's no doubt,
And his jumping's according to Cocker.

When Hynam's outstripp'd, and when Alfred is whipp'd,
To keep him in sight of the leaders,
While Blueskin runs true, but his backers look blue,
For his rider's at work with the bleeders ;

When his carcase of beef brings 'the bullock' to grief,
And the rush of the tartan is ended ;
When Archer's in trouble—who's that pulling double,
And taking his leaps unextended ?

He wins all the way, and the rest—sweet, they say,
Is the smell of the newly-turn'd plough, friend,
But you smell it too close when it stops eyes and nose,
And you can't tell your horse from your cow, friend.


Scheme XAXX XBXB XCBC XDXD XCXC XCCC XECE XCXC XXXE XAXA XFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (82%)
Metre 10111101101 010110110 01111001111 0011101110 101011001011 011111010 001101101111 1010011110 111011111 011110010 10100101010010 111010110 0111111101 0111111111 101111111101 1111 10111111111 1011110110 11011101111 11111111010 111111111 111111111 11110101110110 010110111 101101111111 011110010 111110011110 110110110 101001101111 0111110010 11011111111 011010110 1101011011 111011010 1111111011 111011101 11111101011 0011010110 110010111010 010111 11101001111 1011010111 111111111101 0111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,980
Words 381
Sentences 13
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:02 min read
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Adam Lindsay Gordon

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