Analysis of True clouds do fall as heat warms all!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)



Look up! What do you see? A valley, a hill, a cloud, or, a tree? I see, them all! Beyond, the skies, the forces, take charge! The cold meets the heat! "What is that,"! Is exactly, what it did screech! As they mixed, a twist, and, a twist! Then boom! The explosion! As, the heat, multiplied, it's gift! Drifting, away, far, into space! A crackling sound we couldn't have heard followed by another boom in the distance as a new star once then forms! As the lighting also does travel and hit the ground that's beneath, the memories start flowing while all shelter is reached! Safety is first, life does it's work! Think of the oceans! Learn to swim, then jump in head first!


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Characters 671
Words 125
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 502
Words per line (avg) 124
Letters per stanza (avg) 502
Words per stanza (avg) 124

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A short poem about the weather!

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Written on September 01, 2023

Submitted by devonb.14033 on September 01, 2023

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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