Analysis of The Kingdom of Make Believe Has Fallen



The kingdom of make believe has fallen,
The magic is no more.
The fairies have all flown away,
And the elves have closed their door.

The trees no longer sing,
The flowers no longer dance.
The sun has lost its smile,
And the moon is filled with trance.

The world is a dark and dreary place,
Without the joy of make believe.
I long for the days gone by,
When dreams came true and anything was possible.

But now that the kingdom has fallen,
I must find a way to move on.
I must find a way to find joy,
Even in this dark and dreary world.

I know that it won't be easy,
But I'm determined to try.
I know that somewhere,
There is still magic to be found.


Scheme ABXB XCXC XXDX AXXX XDXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 0101101110 010111 01011101 0011111 011101 0101101 011111 0011111 011010101 01011101 1110111 11110101100 111010110 11101111 11101111 100110101 11111110 1101011 1111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 652
Words 153
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on August 27, 2023

Submitted by ggolden9 on August 28, 2023

Modified by ggolden9 on August 28, 2023

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